IELTS Bar Chart of Age Teams 2024

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The bar chart illustrates the quantity of salt a mean man and lady consumed per day (divided into 9 age teams) in a European nation in 2019. Models are measured in milligrams.

General, males had a better consumption of salt in comparison with ladies and salt consumption was above the really helpful every day quantity in most age teams. Moreover, center aged women and men had the best consumption of salt, versus younger youngsters who had the bottom. A higher distinction in salt consumption between the sexes may very well be seen as women and men aged.

The salt consumed by the youngest age group was slightly below 2000mg every day for boys however solely 1500mg for women aged 5 and under. Salt consumption then elevated in each sexes to succeed in a excessive of over 5000mg in males and virtually 4000mg in ladies aged 30 to 39.

Concerning the 40 to 49 age group, salt consumption stood at about 4500mg every day for males, whereas for ladies it was round 3500mg. This decreased for each genders and by the age of 70 or extra, consumption was nonetheless comparatively excessive in males (slightly below 4000mg), whereas ladies took the really helpful every day quantity of two,300mg.

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1. The introduction is concise and introduces all key details about the chart, corresponding to classes, divisions, models, nation, frequency and so on. Introductions are often only one sentence in writing process 1 studies.
2. The overview is separate and accommodates all key options about highs, lows and any helpful comparisons that give a transparent overview.
3. The physique paragraphs include smaller element and all sentences are supported by numbers from the chart.
4. Somewhat than giving every particular person age group, key factors are chosen and different teams are known as “salt consumption elevated over the age teams…”. This provides details about different age teams with out going into an excessive amount of element.
5. At all times use versatile vocabulary about age: center aged individuals/ youngsters aged 5 and beneath / younger youngsters / as individuals grew older / the youngest age group / the oldest age group / over the age teams given / individuals aged 30 to 39 / the 40 to 49 age group / by the age of 70 or extra / individuals between 30 and 39 years of age
6. This chart does include lots of data which is why the report is 200 phrases in size. Nevertheless, most studies will in all probability be between 170 and 190 phrases. Longer doesn’t imply higher. It simply depends upon the chart. You do not want to write down the phrase rely beneath your report in your take a look at – I try this simply on your profit.